For My Big Brother

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THE CORINTHIAN
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For My Big Brother

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Post by THE CORINTHIAN »

For James (My big brother)

You were the light that showed me the way
You gave me hope for a better day
Untill three shots took you away

You filled my heart with your strength & courage
But now that you are gone
Im filled with weakness & fear

With out you Im lost in the dark
Afraid I may drown
Where is my hope ?
Oh how I wish that you were still around

There's a hole in my heart that nothing can fill
A pain deep inside that nothing can kill

But even though you are no longer around
In the hearts of my friends your strength & kindness can be found
Last edited by anoyomouse on Tue Dec 08, 2009 5:22 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Reason: Spelling and readability
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Post by Cat147 »

awesome hun!!!
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Post by Wolfers »

Wowy. That is very heartrending. It's beautiful, hun.
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Post by Kodey »

Wow, very beautiful poem. Very sad though.
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