THE LETTER
You wrote me a letter, declaring your love
You spoke about flying, just like a dove
You told me those sweet lies
and tore me apart
You left me floating in grey skies
With a broken heart.
I found your old letter, still good as new
And glared in pain as if it were you.
I tore it apart like you tore me
Ripped words from page
And tossed them into eternity
All I could feel within was the fire of rage.
But now I am calm, the embers are ash
And now I am free from the shackles of my past.
~~~~~
I wrote this today after finding a love letter my ex wrote me. I felt very betrayed because she dumped me for someone else without ever trying to talk things over.
So I tore it apart and finally let go of it all, as it was the last thing I had left of the entire relationship.
[apologies if this turned into a vent]
The Letter
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The Letter
Don't waste your time looking back, you're not going that way.
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Re: The Letter
Sorry to hear about that. That's really rough.
I like the poem that came out of it though. You are really good at writing very vivid imagery...
I like the poem that came out of it though. You are really good at writing very vivid imagery...
"I change shapes just to hide in this place, but I'm still, I'm still an animal" -Miike Snow, 'Animal'
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Thanks guys ^^
Don't waste your time looking back, you're not going that way.
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Re: The Letter
I wrote a poem to my ex once titled "fuck you"
Hahahaha! But I don't think I'll share it...
Hahahaha! But I don't think I'll share it...
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Hahaha such elegance xD
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I have to admit, your poem gave me feels.
Very well written. Poems usually come out really powerful when you put true emotion into your writing.
Very well written. Poems usually come out really powerful when you put true emotion into your writing.
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Thanks Chloe ^^
I have to agree with you there. Anything done with emotion behind it will always be a step ahead of anything done without it.
I have to agree with you there. Anything done with emotion behind it will always be a step ahead of anything done without it.
Don't waste your time looking back, you're not going that way.
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