Memoir of a wanderer

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Memoir of a wanderer

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Just a poem I came up with this evening. Thought I'd share, and see what peeps would think.
I'm in now way a pro at this, but I am slowly getting into it.
Please be kind :P
Anyways here goes:
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*Memoir of a Wanderer*

Here I am, wandering the wastes you left behind.
I find an oasis of memories, cool clear water filled with laughter.
But even here I find no solace, as the water corrupts with the pain that you have caused.
So here I am, wandering your wasteland once more.
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Don't waste your time looking back, you're not going that way.
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Post by Trace »

Wow. Very well done.
I actually like that quite a bit. For its brevity, the imagery is fantastic.
You're making me want to try to get back into writing poetry... I'd love to see more!
"I change shapes just to hide in this place, but I'm still, I'm still an animal" -Miike Snow, 'Animal'
"Where there's life, there's hope."-Terence
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Thanks Trace, I'm glad you liked it :)

I'm definitely going to post more, as soon as I write something new xD
Don't waste your time looking back, you're not going that way.
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