Um... ok... so I is be writing "hawkward" poetry... any criticism is good criticism... even the odd flying rock should be fun...
(most of these I originally posted on DA but I really want to know what you guys think of them)
Wasteland
The burning light of day makes the buildings crumble.
Stones, spent past making elephants stumble.
The litter of the dreams the wisdoms we heed.
The bars that cage the new breed.
The wasted earth
Stolen worth, taken by the burning sun.
Hole heatedly yearning
The edges upturning
Reaching for the moisture now gone
The fool and the thief
The fool and the thief
Whenever they meet
A rush of things exchanging hands
In the pale light of the street
The thief he stole
He stole for good
He stole for life
he stole for food
The fool he did
Feed the thief
He bought the goods he sold once more
Those thieved from dreaming to settle the score
One night a thought was slit
Blood strained gold shone barely lit
The thief got away but fools body stayed
Thats it for now
The heap of words in Honin's head
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Re: The heap of words in Honin's head
i like that fool and thief one
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Re: The heap of words in Honin's head
I like the Waste Land one, dark, I like dark.
The fool is also good a heavy topic with a slightly light spin nice contrast. On this not you should check out the following album if you have not heard it before "Nick Cage and the bad seeds - Murder Ballads". Every song revolves around a murder.
The fool is also good a heavy topic with a slightly light spin nice contrast. On this not you should check out the following album if you have not heard it before "Nick Cage and the bad seeds - Murder Ballads". Every song revolves around a murder.
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Re: The heap of words in Honin's head
Sounds grimly appetizing... Will do... thanks for reading guys
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Re: The heap of words in Honin's head
Ok. So another yet smallish poem
What a waste when dreams contradict reality
And what is another dead human but a casualty
You weave these dreams, I'm in love it seems
But still I wake too find empty arms
What a waste when dreams contradict reality
And what is another dead human but a casualty
You weave these dreams, I'm in love it seems
But still I wake too find empty arms