The TWWWW story

[rusted hydra]

Ok so I have this story called TWWWW(its an acronym, and I'll reveal it with one Subchapter).

It starts out as a porcupine girl (named Tanya) going into a place she's not suppose to be in and learns something that none of the other villagers know.

I've released 3 subchapters but I'm kinda stuck on the 4th.
(those interested here is the 3 I've posted: https://www.sofurry.com/browse/folder/s ... lder=32987 )

Now where I've stopped is a section of faffing about and I can easily finish it but when I do I need to continue the story. I have a specific end goal of this story.

I sort of have this idea of having someone get sick... and then they're cured by Maxwell (then this somehow contrives into a reason for Tanya to confront Maxwell and then bam I can continue the story from there) But it doesn't seem to work, it feels like faffing about and leaves a plot hole for me. Doesn't feel like a constructive way to lead to my goal.

I think I should just strip those 3 subchapters and start totally over.
I can think of a few changes but those will end up fucking up the end goal of the story so might just leave those first 3 as they are.

[Sev]

You do realize that you never introduced Maxwell in this thread? So when you mentioned that he cured someone, my first thought was "uuuh".

[rusted hydra]

Read the story and youll learn who maxwell is. Its not that long.
Im on my phone so typing is a bit faffy.

And if your not up for reading it then don't bother delivering help

[rusted hydra]

Maybe I'll just flush this whole story and write a new one: dude walks into cave. Dude sees dragon. Dude goes "wow I love dragons." And the dragon then turns out to be female and goes "wow, someone that isnt immeadiately trying to fucking stab me in the face. I love youse!"
End of story
I save time and effort and I get my painkiller for the sickness.
Everyone is happy for the next few moths

[Contrast]

Dudes, dragons, and moths? Sounds kinky.

[rusted hydra]

Dudes, dragons, and moths? Sounds kinky.

wait moths? I meant to say months.

though now I could add a love triangle into this story, and it can end with a threesome.

[Sev]

I never said that I wouldn't read it. I simply stated that your synopsis was a bit... disjointed.

[Contrast]

Dudes, dragons, and moths? Sounds kinky.

wait moths? I meant to say months.

though now I could add a love triangle into this story, and it can end with a threesome.

Make it a Venezuelan Poodle Moth. They're cute. :3

[Sev]

You have a very interesting idea about what is cute. This moth is certainly curious, but a kitten, it is not.

Still better than the wasp, though.

[rusted hydra]

Still can't think of a work around for the story. Guess its going on ice for a long time