Oh, These Wasted Years

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Bartimaeus Lumiere
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Oh, These Wasted Years

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Oh, these wasted years
Such concerned cries
Fell on deaf ears

Staring with your blind eyes
Oh, weeping!
Your heart
never could shed tears

Oh, these wasted years

You see
Shaped the person
That is Me

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Assurance is gained through time, not the words or opinions of judgmental beings. Assurance is gained through the results of our actions in future-we make no mistakes as long as we learn from our flawed actions, it is then that we may see ourselves, truly, for the first time.

A poem I did back in 2012, any thoughts?
In any case, enjoy and thanks for reading! :3
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Re: Oh, These Wasted Years

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*sheds a tear and sniffs as i clap*..wow..

I love poetry like this, it has emotional art,imagery and great format of how you put it out..wow man ;_; great job
Yes it is true ^^, i was passed through this odd configuration of a human and for many years have pondered..believed that i am a therion, but i lurk in this furry fandom for it is a good way to stay close to my fox corporeal *giggles* so my "sojourn" is an aeon ^,..,^

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Bartimaeus Lumiere
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Re: Oh, These Wasted Years

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Post by Bartimaeus Lumiere »

Sunny Fox wrote:*sheds a tear and sniffs as i clap*..wow..

I love poetry like this, it has emotional art,imagery and great format of how you put it out..wow man ;_; great job
Thank you, thank you so much ~smiles~

I'm really glad you enjoyed it :3
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