A comic I'm brewing up.(now posted in the right section)

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A comic I'm brewing up.(now posted in the right section)

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(now again)
Ok so simply were going to have some magic, special abilities, guns, steampunk(so-so), and a lotta airships.

Start out with a daily routine of the Bursnell family; consisting of Mr. Bursnell (the vice mayor) Mrs. Bursnell, their 3 sons(Tallow, Mikael, Hotshot) and their 2 adopted children (Keinke and Froh); A happy life in the small industrial town of Thorndale. Happy until the arrival of a mysterious, well dressed stranger who stirs up trouble with promises of wishes and so on. He disappears suddenly with no trace and shortly after the town comes under attack from the legendary Schmerz Drach, the feared sky dreadnought and its crew: the Siekduiwel pirates. Soon the whole town is engulfed in flame and the Siekduiwel plundering unfazed by the firestorm. Tallow, Hotshot and Froh try their best to fight off the attack but only succeed in hindering the pirates’ offence.

After Schmerz Drach had left and Tallow had put out the flames the Bursnells find out their parents, along with many of the people they once knew, had died. Stricken with grieve they feel confused at what to do but Froh stands up and proclaims he will hunt down the Siekduiwel and gain justice. Froh's confidence inspires his siblings to join him.

And so Tallow, Hotshot, Keinke, Mikael, And Froh (with his strange new acquaintance) set out on their journey.
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