Howls in the Park

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Howls in the Park

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Part one

http://chrislj.deviantart.com/art/Howls ... rislj&qo=1

Part two

http://chrislj.deviantart.com/art/Howls ... rislj&qo=0

Please let me know what you think.
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Re: Howls in the dark

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Looking at the ending for part 2, I think this could very well need to be moved to the yiffy section soon :P

But other than that, it reads rather well. Nice pacing, if a little shaky on the grammar sometimes. Maybe a little cliched at times but that isn't always a bad thing with romance.

All in all, nicely written :)
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Re: Howls in the dark

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Yeah sorry about the grammar. I normally only have time to write at work and my Microsoft word keeps changing my sentences and punctuation. And no, I have no intention on making this a full sexual novel in anyway. Love story sure but not sex. I am looking to hopefully find someone who would want to work with me on the story and artwork for the book. While I write a lot, I have lost my need and will for drawing. Also, I uploaded part one and two and only noticed the errors afterward. I haven't had time to go through it all and correct it and then upload it.
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Howls in the Park Completed!

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So I finally finished the five part short story Howls in the Park. My photoshop stills are not up to scratch but I think I want to make a graphic novel out of this one.

Please can you guys read it on my deviantart page and if you have skills in photoshop as well as coming strips and would like to help a poor fellow out, PM me or just comment here...

There is the link to my page, http://chrislj.deviantart.com/

And here is a direct link to all rge story parts, http://chrislj.deviantart.com/gallery/42677803

I do appologise for any spelling or grammer errors. I normally write late at night. I will go through all the parts when I hace some time and correct them.

THANKS GUYS!
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