Nameless poem

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Nameless poem

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This is the first poem I wrote that was any good,but alas I can't come up with a good name for it,

I guess even a devil can cry if he loses a loved one.
I know even a saint would sin if his heartache took over.
If no love is better than love lost,why do I cry for you?

I know your heart sings when you find love.
I guess it grows weaker over time as well.
If its true,don't give it away blindly.

You know an angel can curse when his love dies.
You hear atheists cry to God when their love turns away.
You see people fall to their knees when they have to choose.
Choose to sink or swim,fight or flee,love or die...
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Re: Nameless poem

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Post by Ash »

I Like your poem -smiles- and nicely writen hey, and itz good -nodz- where u writing it for some1 or just writing down? -gives u a skittle- Great poem xP
"I wonder what happiness could look like if we could give it a form.. The Shape of happiness might resemble glass.. Even though you don’t usually notice it, it’s still definitely there.. You merely have to change your Point of View slightly.. and that glass will sparkle when it reflects the light.. I doubt that anything could argue its existence more eloquently.." - Code Geass (Lelouch vi Britannia)

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