A Furry Dream (poem)

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A Furry Dream (poem)

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Two poems...one day...why?
This is a poem I wrote in 2000 (so sorry if it realy sucks) but it is furry themed unlike my other ones. That and a good friend of mine suggested that I put more of my work on the net and forums etc.
so here is...

A FURRY DREAM

In my dreams I see you there
The sun upon your fur so fair
But for this love, must be aware
For when I wake you won't be there

So I wish to sleep...not wake
Happy in this wanted state
From dream to dream I cannot wait
Hope to stay this hour late

My head upon your breast, I lay
Happy, calm, content I stay
Fearful of the waking day
Of the time I go away

I feel our love shining true
When I leave will you come too?
If you could, I wish you'd do
Cause life is death if without you

Head to head I feel your lips
Joined in hand by fingertips
A warm embrace does keep us crisp
Mouth to mouth I feel your lips

As I wake...again mundane
In the world of norm and sane
With my heart aching from pain
I wish to go to sleep again
'Chisa wa madowazu, yusha wa osorezu.'
"A wise man does not lose his way, a brave man does not fear."
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Post by Rakuen Growlithe »

Very nice poem there. Bit sad though. Out of curiosity why isn't whoever it's about there?
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It was written from the perspective of a human, Who wants to realy be a fur. Its in his dreams as well as the 'image' of someone he loves.

I wrote it like that...but I attached my own feelings about someone I had a big crush on but knew I could never be with...and this was the result.
'Chisa wa madowazu, yusha wa osorezu.'
"A wise man does not lose his way, a brave man does not fear."
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