Heya furs!
I noticed there was no particular thread for poetry O_o ...
Put away the cutlery
Please don't curse
I don't know what i'm doing
here goes nothing....
since I started the thread, here is a poem I wrote while walking to my transport to school and I saw my (so called) best friend to busy on BBM to greet me
(No it goes deeper the *so called* is not based on him not greeting me once)
Here goes!
tell me what you think!
The social network.
Cursed be that wreched creation
Turning people into mindless drones
Shockwaves sent through the nation
Constantly glued to their phones
When the red light flickering slowly
The whole population grows lonely
On the display ''low battery''
Followed by a loud clattering
Social lives lay in ruins
Blind dates doesent show
Happy face turns to silent sob
Marriage ruiend affair gone
Social networks all alike
Could be possitive when used right
The sad truth lies in wait
Stalking its prey in the dim light
When the world grows to a quite place
Fuled by hate and empty of love
Will BBM feel any sorrow
Will facebook help to borrow
The faith to save this empty cave
That once thrived of love.
if any spelling mistakes are found, help me illiminate them ( I suck at spelling... )
thread for poetry
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Re: thread for poetry
Twinkle, twinkle, little bat!
How I wonder what you're at!
Up above the world you fly,
Like a tea tray in the sky.
Twinkle, twinkle, little bat!
How I wonder what you're at!
- Lewis Carroll, Through the looking glass
love that poem. don't care if i didnt make it up, just love it!!! and it has a bat!
How I wonder what you're at!
Up above the world you fly,
Like a tea tray in the sky.
Twinkle, twinkle, little bat!
How I wonder what you're at!
- Lewis Carroll, Through the looking glass
love that poem. don't care if i didnt make it up, just love it!!! and it has a bat!
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Re: thread for poetry
There's no particular thread for poetry because there's this entire sub-forum for any sort of literature. There's no need to clump everything together, especially when people will mostly be posting their own work and desire feedback on the pieces they spent time creating. It becomes very difficult, and messy, to give feedback when everything is all in the same thread.
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Re: thread for poetry
Ah ok... *ears droop* oh well. Whats done is done....
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Re: thread for poetry
Well for Adagio's poem
not bad , unfort i forgot what makes a good poem when i left matric but its sounds good to my ear and touches apon my veiws too(burn wretched hellspawn creation that is networking!)
so gets my vote for being good
(brother based his matric art project on making blackberries seems as evil as possible)
not bad , unfort i forgot what makes a good poem when i left matric but its sounds good to my ear and touches apon my veiws too(burn wretched hellspawn creation that is networking!)
so gets my vote for being good
(brother based his matric art project on making blackberries seems as evil as possible)
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