Ok i started to wright my first furry storie about dragons problem is i need someone to proof read it so far i have 2 chapters writen
About a total of 1800 words
So who is up for it
My new storie series
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- Falconcommand
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My new storie series
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Re: My new storie series
No offense, but if you start off with misspelling the heading, things aren't looking up.
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Re: My new storie series
maybe you should just post it so that people here can read it.
Dont worry about the trolls...
They will have negative things to say but they are not the majority
Dont worry about the trolls...
They will have negative things to say but they are not the majority
- Durosuka
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Re: My new storie series
I'll read it
I like dragons, and I don't mind spelling at all *growls at Fluke*
just tell me and e-mail me the first 2 chapters. just note, I'm very direct when people asks me my opinion on stuff so forgive me when I get nit-picky on stuff.
I like dragons, and I don't mind spelling at all *growls at Fluke*
just tell me and e-mail me the first 2 chapters. just note, I'm very direct when people asks me my opinion on stuff so forgive me when I get nit-picky on stuff.
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Re: My new storie series
Actually Fluke has a very good point. If you're writing then you need to pay attention to things like spelling and grammar. As a writer, it is your job to convey an idea to the reader and that is impaired if people have to spend time trying to figure out what it is you were saying. That's why a lot of writers, even on the internet, have people read through their material and check it before it is posted or published.
In fairness to the OP he is asking for someone to check his work so presumably he is aware of the problems. (For the record I counted three spelling and 14 grammar errors in the post. If you post stuff here I can check it. I partially fixed up another story on here.)
In fairness to the OP he is asking for someone to check his work so presumably he is aware of the problems. (For the record I counted three spelling and 14 grammar errors in the post. If you post stuff here I can check it. I partially fixed up another story on here.)
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Re: My new storie series
Fair enough yes, spelling and grammar is important. what I meant by growling at fluke was that I don't mind spelling and grammar when it comes to proof reading, it is what the proof reading is for. Sorry for not being very clear on that
I myself am bad with spelling and grammar when I write stuff for the first time round and I only fix them when I'm happy with what I've written and the story. I have a friend who usually goes over my stuff and tells me about stuff that need trimming or things that are unclear and when me and him are done with that then I fix the spelling.
One focuses on the story itself and the creativity until it is finished then figure out the grammar. Since Falconcommand is only on chapter 2 spelling should be the last thing on his mind (unless he intends to publish it chapter for chapter or in batches)
Again, I apologies if I was rude or anything.
I myself am bad with spelling and grammar when I write stuff for the first time round and I only fix them when I'm happy with what I've written and the story. I have a friend who usually goes over my stuff and tells me about stuff that need trimming or things that are unclear and when me and him are done with that then I fix the spelling.
One focuses on the story itself and the creativity until it is finished then figure out the grammar. Since Falconcommand is only on chapter 2 spelling should be the last thing on his mind (unless he intends to publish it chapter for chapter or in batches)
Again, I apologies if I was rude or anything.
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